This needs some punctuation and pauses
Posted By: Listen again on 2009-06-15
In Reply to: word help - sm
Subject: This needs some punctuation and pauses
I think this must be either talking about the patient's caregivers after the transplant, or social/family history. Take another listen for pauses, I think it needs the sentence broken up.
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