I think it reads okay with "which" and without a comma
Posted By: Okie MT on 2007-10-10
In Reply to: which to that? - Michelle
Subject: I think it reads okay with "which" and without a comma
But that's just me. 
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oops should say "Which she will drink..etc. nm
Subject: oops should say "Which she will drink..etc. nm
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can you hear ..angioscope "which" or "this" was taken
Subject: can you hear ..angioscope "which" or "this" was taken
his sentence reads ....
Subject: his sentence reads ....
A 31-year-old white male who presents today for evaluation of a 2-year medical ??? sol/journ (?). I dont' know, does sojourn make sense.
I would do like you have it. Reads better than hyphenated I think. nm
Subject: I would do like you have it. Reads better than hyphenated I think. nm
Sentences reads this exactly - please read.
Subject: Sentences reads this exactly - please read.
Her major problem is breathlessness. It is present with no exertion. She used _____ oxygen.
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I am ready to scream. Not sure if it is a method of oxygen or what.
Sentence reads, IUPC and IOFEM were placed.
Subject: Sentence reads, IUPC and IOFEM were placed.
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Subject: I agree, I think if you add "in" in front of opposition, the sentence reads just fine.
Sentence reads: A 20 cc subcutaneous pocket was formed. My question relates to cc versus mL - sm
Subject: Sentence reads: A 20 cc subcutaneous pocket was formed. My question relates to cc versus mL - sm
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Sentence reads: Right axilla reveals a right s/l consolent, pink rash which is slightly pale.
Subject: Sentence reads: Right axilla reveals a right s/l consolent, pink rash which is slightly pale.
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no comma
Subject: no comma
Newest info we got says no comma between 4-year 10-month-old
IMO just need a comma before which
Subject: IMO just need a comma before which
No comma.
Subject: No comma.
x
I'd use a comma
Subject: I'd use a comma
"EMS confirmed that the patient was orthostatic, with a standing BP that could not be auscultated."
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i really am not sure. i would not use a comma.
Subject: i really am not sure. i would not use a comma.
too bad there isnt a english teacher online right now...
No comma, no and.
Subject: No comma, no and.
1:100,000 you need the comma nm
Subject: 1:100,000 you need the comma nm
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Want comma help?
Subject: Want comma help?
<< Looking at either margins tumor-size type of treatment, s/l-agiman treatment and a number of other factors given, this information, it seems the functional loss and cosmetic insult is not merited. >>
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without comma
Subject: without comma
comma before but is used only if but is used to join two independent sentences otherwise not so I think this sentence should be without comma
Comma before Jr. or Sr., not before II, III, etc.
Subject: Comma before Jr. or Sr., not before II, III, etc.
From the BOS:
ordinals
Do not place a comma after a name and before an ordinal. The ordinal may be roman or arabic; follow the preferences of the named individuals.
John D. Rockefeller III
Don't know what BOS says but I put the comma nm
Subject: Don't know what BOS says but I put the comma nm
nm
I'd put comma.....
Subject: I'd put comma.....
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No, no comma. The comma here would take sm
Subject: No, no comma. The comma here would take sm
the place of "and." He's saying the patient is a pleasant elderly woman, not a pleasant and elderly woman. The elderly woman is pleasant.
In other words, would you put a comma here,
The child's new blue ball rolled into the street. No comma as "new" modifies "blue ball," not "new and blue ball."
that or a comma between the two, i.e.
Subject: that or a comma between the two, i.e.
mycophenolic acid, mofetil field
I am not sure where to put the comma here, please sm
Subject: I am not sure where to put the comma here, please sm
Hello. This is OB-GYN and I am not certain if the punctuation is correct. She says it all very fast together. Is the comma right?
A clean-catch UA is packed field, WBCs and RBCs with very short rods.
comma help
Subject: comma help
The part in question is in " ".
When I research this medication some of the research shows it the way I have it typed (with no commas), but some of the research shows it with a comma between hydrochloride and ophthalmic. Is anyone familiar with this medication that can help me out! Thanks!
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yes if you put a comma between the
Subject: yes if you put a comma between the
B12, salicylate - 2 separate meds.
I would use a comma
Subject: I would use a comma
This patient presents to us status post left ring finger volar plate, ulnar collateral ligament avulsion fracture.
This patient presents to us status post left ring finger volar plate/ulnar collateral ligament avulsion fracture.
I do use a comma between but the
Subject: I do use a comma between but the
Comma help
Subject: Comma help
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comma....
Subject: comma....
Equally to:
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I use a comma the way you have it now.
Subject: I use a comma the way you have it now.
Per my account specifics, we don't use a numbered list. We separate the diagnoses with a comma between each one.
no comma there, where would you put it?????
Subject: no comma there, where would you put it?????
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Comma?
Subject: Comma?
Hello everyone!!
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No comma.
Subject: No comma.
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No comma
Subject: No comma
The way I was taught is that if each part of the sentence can stand alone as a separate sentence, then use a comma. In your case, the second half after the comma would not make sense as a single sentence.
Comma Help
Subject: Comma Help
She has a sister, Mary (32), and two brothers, Simon (40) and Bill (42).
or
She has a sister Mary (32) and two brothers Simon (40) and Bill (42).
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She has a sister, Mary (32).
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She has a sister Mary (32).
Comma before with
I have done a lot of QA over the years, and lately MTs are using a comma before the word "with" throughout the entire report as if with was equal to "which." I have looked through and BOS, but I cannot find a general rule on this. Does anyone have any solid information on this? It would be very much appreciated.
I would not put a comma before
Subject: I would not put a comma before
'where'.
I would put a comma before...,and diagnosis...' and a 2nd before ..,but...'
comma help
Subject: comma help
X-rays available from an outside source dated 02/20/2009 indicates joint effusion of the elbow with a fracture of the left humerus lateral epicondyle noted anterior and superior displacement of the fracture fragment. Proximal radius and ulna appear to be intact.
I thought after noted but unsure at this point. tia.
comma
Subject: comma
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X-rays available from an outside source dated 02/20/2009 indicates joint effusion of the elbow with a fracture of the left humerus lateral epicondyle noted anterior and superior displacement of the fracture fragment. Proximal radius and ulna appear to be intact.
I don't see the need for a comma before the " --". nm
Subject: I don't see the need for a comma before the " --". nm
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Subject: comma help
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comma help
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Subject: Need comma help.....
I need help with comma placement: She had been seen in consultation who felt the gait disturbance was due to multiple factors including the degenerative joint disease and peripheral neuropathy he also felt she had an aliment of Parkinson disease.
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Subject: Because a comma
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should there be a comma...
Subject: should there be a comma...
after anterior impingement?
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comma
Subject: comma
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comma help
Subject: comma help
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RIGHT SUPERFICIAL FEMORAL ARTERY TO POSTERIOR TIBIAL ARTERY, BYPASS GRAFT WITH IN SITU SAPHENOUS VEIN.
Thanks for any help.
No comma.
Subject: No comma.
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comma help again
Subject: comma help again
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