I think
Posted By: (sm) on 2008-11-18
In Reply to: How on earth to punctuate this sentence... - Yikes!
Subject: I think
it's fine the way you have it, but you could remove the after poor and it would still be fine. You could also start a new sentence with but and remove the same comma I mentioned previously.
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