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Posted By: SuPA on 2005-09-28
In Reply to: Opinions needed on my tweaking ... sm - Pat
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Because he is intelligent, hard-working, motivated and personal, I believe he will be a fine physician.
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I recently had the opportunity to become acquainted with Mr. X when he spent a week here in my Internal Medicine office this past summer. He is currently a student at XX University and has decided on a career in medicine. In preparation for the process of starting a medical career, Mr. X has spent time with multiple physicians in order to demonstrate that he is serious about a career in medicine. One of Mr. X's assets is his excellent personal skills, as you will see when you interview him. I also found that he asked intelligent questions and showed a genuine interest while he was here with me in the office. His thought processes seemed both logical and rational during our discussions.
In my opinion, Mr. X has all the makings of a dedicated future physician. I believe he is motivated, hard working, intelligent and personable. I hightly recommend that he be accepted in your training to become an xxx physician.
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Or, You can write....He possesses qualities such as ..... and in my opinion he will be a fine physician.
Opinions needed on my tweaking ... sm
Subject: Opinions needed on my tweaking ... sm
Here's my tweaking: I think it looks okay except for the last sentence. Can anyone help me make that last sentence look better? Thank you.
Dear xxxx :
I am pleased to write a letter of recommendation for XXX who is applying to your program. XXX spent a week with me in my internal medicine office this past summer. He is currently a student at XXX and has decided on a career in a medicine. In the process of starting his medical career, xxx has spent time with multiple physicians to show that he is serious about a career in medicine. He has excellent personal skills, as you will see when you interview him.
During the time I spent with xxx he asked intelligent questions and showed a genuine interest. His thought process seemed both logical and rational during our discussions.
Based on my experiences with x, I recommend highly that he be accepted in your training to become an xxx physician. I believe he has all the makings of good physician, intelligence hard-working, motivated, and personal.
Help needed Tweaking a letter. See message please
Subject: Help needed Tweaking a letter. See message please
My MD dictated a letter of recommendation and would like me to make him sound better. Gosh!! I am so brain dead when it comes to these things... been doing verbatim transcription for far toooo long.
Would anyone out there like to give this a whirl?
I appreciate any suggstions. Thanks.
Mr. X spent a week with me in my internal medicine office this past summer. He is currently a student at XX University and has decided on a career in a medicine. Mr. X, in the process of starting his medical career, has spent time with multiple physicians to show that he is serious about a career in medicine. Mr X has excellent personal skills, as you will see when you interview him. He asked intelligent questions and showed a genuine interest while he was here with me in the office. His thought process seemed both logical and rational during our discussions.
Mr. X has all the makings of a good physician, intelligence, hardworking, motivated, and personal. I recommend highly that he be accepted in your training to become an xxx physician.
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